Score: 7

"Decent."

submission: M.S.R.E Special Edition

date: June 26, 2008

A lot of improvement over originals. One major flaw, though.

"Your" instead of every "you're". There are many common mistakes I got used to, but for some reason this one still irks me.

Don't mind me, though. Decent job.

Score: 8

"No, seriously."

submission: Mecha Dress Up Game

date: June 25, 2008

Make a proper game. You can't code but there are plenty of skilled Flash programmers on this site. Find someone to work together with.

It will be worth the effort.

Score: 7

"Thanks for sharing."

submission: D'sova RPG

date: April 6, 2008

Here's the feedback you wanted.

First of all, in response to a review by Istentelen, I'd suggest making some sort of quest journal, where one could actually see what player is supposed to do according to triggered dialogues. Not opening portals until game is absolutely sure player knows what to do next would be another part of succes.

Second of all, I want to walk faster. You could also make town locations smaller.

Third. Interface is ugly and the inventory page is off the scale. Notice how most RPGs had some icons next to inventory items, ability to sort. And none of them had lines in place of unused slots. Inventory page is the weakest aspect of this game.

Or is it? Time for fourth suggestion, then. Items are clogging up my inventory. Give me a chance to sell them, or make fights harder, so that I actually have to use items more often.

A lot of balancing, a lot of interface rehauls, and a lot of work on location graphics and setup. Despite all that the game is addicting. Good luck on improving your work.