Score: 7

"Decent."

submission: M.S.R.E Special Edition

date: June 26, 2008

A lot of improvement over originals. One major flaw, though.

"Your" instead of every "you're". There are many common mistakes I got used to, but for some reason this one still irks me.

Don't mind me, though. Decent job.

Score: 8

"No, seriously."

submission: Mecha Dress Up Game

date: June 25, 2008

Make a proper game. You can't code but there are plenty of skilled Flash programmers on this site. Find someone to work together with.

It will be worth the effort.

Score: 7

"Thanks for sharing."

submission: D'sova RPG

date: April 6, 2008

Here's the feedback you wanted.

First of all, in response to a review by Istentelen, I'd suggest making some sort of quest journal, where one could actually see what player is supposed to do according to triggered dialogues. Not opening portals until game is absolutely sure player knows what to do next would be another part of succes.

Second of all, I want to walk faster. You could also make town locations smaller.

Third. Interface is ugly and the inventory page is off the scale. Notice how most RPGs had some icons next to inventory items, ability to sort. And none of them had lines in place of unused slots. Inventory page is the weakest aspect of this game.

Or is it? Time for fourth suggestion, then. Items are clogging up my inventory. Give me a chance to sell them, or make fights harder, so that I actually have to use items more often.

A lot of balancing, a lot of interface rehauls, and a lot of work on location graphics and setup. Despite all that the game is addicting. Good luck on improving your work.

Score: 7

"OK!"

submission: Wojak

date: January 7, 2008

A fan of Mleczko, I reckon. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it was inspired by his drawing, aye?
Noice animation. Quite a few details you managed to include, but could be more. I hope to see you on front page before '09, so you do your best.

Score: 7

"Not a masterpiece"

submission: Wolfenstein 3D Headshot

date: November 19, 2007

That was a good piece of flashcraft.
Smooth animation, synchronised audio, original (a bit) idea.

...but you're still a nazi.

Cheers.

Score: 10

"Honestly"

submission: We Drink Ritalin

date: November 18, 2007

This movie is ageless. Eternal.
Just like hats it will last forever.
Though it's not made of wood.
And everyone WILL love this movie.
Resistance is futile.

Score: 9

"Too good."

submission: Intruder : Revelation

date: July 19, 2007

Insanely good graphic, realistic sounds, and superb animation.
The only place for improvement would be hand-to-hand combat; that one element was somewhat... 'sticky'... especialy the kick-man-on-the-rope thing near the beginning. Just one leg thrust forward instead of whole body balancing etc.

Other than that one thing - perfect.

Score: 9

"All right!"

submission: Newgrounds Rumble

date: June 5, 2007

Astonishing work, great character design and only one thing that bothered me.
That is Salad Finger's sex. Some of Firth's flashes may led us to belive that 'it' is in fact a... erm... let's call 'it' female. It's not a flaw of the game, but just something I thought was worth mentioning.

Score: 7

"That's really something."

submission: Koplio man 1

date: March 5, 2007

Well done frame-by-frame work, absolutely no backgrounds, and weird, yet good character design.
One of the best sides of this animation is an utter lack of reason for mindless destruction.
Of course good animation and a visible amount of work put into drawing should be noted too.
Good work. Don't let the technical difficulties discourage you. As long as you have ideas and motivation you're unstoppable.

Score: 9

"Just adding few words of my own..."

submission: Chapter 13

date: March 5, 2007

Films of that kind are still too scarce on portal. Abstract, but not pretentious. A little bit humorous, while majority of submissions are either damn serious (which is sometimes good) or plain comedy (again, this doesn't have to mean 'bad').
I like it, or rather the fact that it was made and submitted.
Not my favourite, but I'm in favour of such work.